WPTF 2021-08-17 Meeting

Community Writing Workshop: Introduction to ToIP V2 White Paper

Meeting Schedule

  • Every Tuesday (UTC Wednesday) during August 2021 —05:00 to 06:00pm PST / 08:00 to 09:00pm  EST / 12:00 to 01:00 UTC (Wednesday)
  • See the entry on the ToIP Calendar for a calendar invite you can copy to your own calendar.

Zoom Meeting Location & Recording

https://zoom.us/j/98069743654?pwd=SVpLdTdrQ2lYamhhellNWldzbFNHZz09

Link to the recording

Link to the Zoom chat

Facilitators

Attendees

Key Documents

  • Introduction to ToIP V2.0.2 (current version from August 18 2021) <== This is the formal Draft Deliverable (in a Google doc) to which contributions or suggestions can be made directly

Agenda

Time

Agenda Item

LeadNotes

5 min

  • Start recording
  • Welcome & antitrust notice
  • Introduction of new members
  • Agenda review
Facilitators
  • Antitrust Policy Notice: Attendees are reminded to adhere to the meeting agenda and not participate in activities prohibited under antitrust and competition laws. Only members of ToIP who have signed the necessary agreements are permitted to participate in this activity beyond an observer role.
  • New Members:
5 minReview of ToIP unique value proposition surveyVictor Syntez
35 minFollow up on comments in Introduction, ToIP in a Nutshell, Problem Statements and ToIP ModelDrummond Reed
5 minDiscussion of other sectionsFacilitators
5 minAugust Week Three Writing AssignmentsAll
  • Seeking volunteers to work on specific sections of the paper over the next week
5 min
  • Review of Decisions and Action Items
  • Plan for the next meeting
Facilitators

Notes

  • Follow up on this idea: The WP should function as a a "call to understanding" to educate audiences about the ToIP stack and the ToIP Foundation. By contrast, the ToIP website should function more as 'a call to action' and address why audiences should get involved in the work of the ToIP Foundation.
  • Drummond Reed proposes to use footnotes to highlight ToIP understanding of terms.

Introduction

Problem statement and ToIP Model

  • Mapping sections of the V2 to sections of the V1.
  • Wenjing Chu text to be added to the section "Why Has Trust..."

ToIP in a Nutshell

  • Drummond Reed introduced new version of the ToIP in a Nutshell section.
  • Carly shared her addition using the idea of 'webs of trust'. Scott Perry added comments regarding 'webs of trust'.

ToIP Unique Value Proposition

  • Victor Syntez presented a diagram to highlight popular answers.
  • Jacques Bikoundou suggested to add 'global forum' to the description of the ToIP Foundation.

Decisions

  • Retooling ToIP WP V2 to position problem statement earlier in the document than it was in the original WP.
  • Add the definition of the term 'trust' to the section "Why Has Trust..."

Action Items