Community Writing Workshop: Introduction to ToIP V2 White Paper

Meeting Schedule

Every Tuesday (UTC Wednesday) during August 2021 —05:00 to 06:00pm PST / 08:00 to 09:00pm EST / 12:00 to 01:00 UTC (Wednesday)
See the entry on the ToIP Calendar for a calendar invite you can copy to your own calendar.

Link to the recording

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Introduction to ToIP V2.0.2 (current version from August 18 2021) <== This is the formal Draft Deliverable (in a Google doc) to which contributions or suggestions can be made directly

Time	Agenda Item	Lead	Notes
5 min	Start recording Welcome & antitrust notice Introduction of new members Agenda review	Facilitators	Antitrust Policy Notice: Attendees are reminded to adhere to the meeting agenda and not participate in activities prohibited under antitrust and competition laws. Only members of ToIP who have signed the necessary agreements are permitted to participate in this activity beyond an observer role. New Members:
5 min	Review of ToIP unique value proposition survey	@Victor Syntez
35 min	Follow up on comments in Introduction, ToIP in a Nutshell, Problem Statements and ToIP Model	@Drummond Reed
5 min	Discussion of other sections	Facilitators
5 min	August Week Three Writing Assignments	All	Seeking volunteers to work on specific sections of the paper over the next week
5 min	Review of Decisions and Action Items Plan for the next meeting	Facilitators

Follow up on this idea: The WP should function as a a "call to understanding" to educate audiences about the ToIP stack and the ToIP Foundation. By contrast, the ToIP website should function more as 'a call to action' and address why audiences should get involved in the work of the ToIP Foundation.
@Drummond Reed proposes to use footnotes to highlight ToIP understanding of terms.

Review of comments by @Eric Drury , @Bart Suichies , @Wenjing Chu and @sankarshan

@Drummond Reed introduced new version of the ToIP in a Nutshell section.
@Carly shared her addition using the idea of 'webs of trust'. @Scott Perry added comments regarding 'webs of trust'.

@Victor Syntez presented a diagram to highlight popular answers.
@Jacques Bikoundou suggested to add 'global forum' to the description of the ToIP Foundation.

Retooling ToIP WP V2 to position problem statement earlier in the document than it was in the original WP.
Add the definition of the term 'trust' to the section "Why Has Trust..."

@Victor Syntez to post a request for comments on the #general Slack channel on "What is the ToIP Foundation’s unique value proposition?"

@Judith Fleenor (Deactivated) and @Victor Syntez will coordinate text inside ToIP Working Groups section with WG chairs.

@Victor Syntez look into adding content from V1 into V2 according to meeting discussion.

@Scott Perry will contribute text in the Real-World Trust Infrastructure section (possible renamed) but not until after Aug 15.

@Drummond Reed will contribute text in the Introduction and ToIP in a Nutshell sections.